I spent about an hour this evening rewriting the first section of “The Graveyard Shift”. I did about 1,000 words and it’s much better than it was before. Now I’ve got the first two sections of the stories complete and I think there is enough glue to hold the reader through the rest of the mystery. I’m stopping now because House is coming on soon, but I’m not looking forward to getting to work on the remaing story. I think I’ve got the toughest part out of the way (although I have three more major characters to introduce).