Okay, so I’m 2 minutes late, but I’m really off to bed now. I completed the revisions that I needed to make. In order to address the various issues, the story grew by about 900 words. Tomorrow, I’ll read through the whole thing and see if there is anything else I can cut, but for now, I am pretty pleased with the way I handled the issues. I think I was able to address all of them and improve the story at the same time.